Tuesday, May 1, 2007

Today I went and met with Ryan about my paper and I feel WAY better about it. He gave me some ideas and it helped alot. I need one more page and I am about to try and finish it up!!! :)

Monday, April 30, 2007

I am having a harder time with this paper than the last one. I am having a hard time stayin with one point ... I dont know what to do and it is stressing me out since it is due thursday!!!!

Thursday, April 19, 2007

Reading Response Two 4/19/07

MLA Citation: Lakie, Jeff. Disadvantages of Online Education. 28 July 2005. 18 Apr. 2005 http://articlealley.com/article_3464_22.html.

Summary: This website tells some of the disadvantagesof using online education. It explains how working on your on can be a huge disadvantage because you are not getting any social education. It explains how people are so busy today that with having a job and children it would be much harder to find time to do this. While you are in class you are forced to listen to your teacher and on the internet you can loose your concentration too easily.

Importance: It is important because it gives some good disadvantages about online education. It gives a lot of information about this and makes some good points.

Suporting Source: This website could be used to support my argument because it explaints how difficult it is to do online education while living a life that also consists of a job and family.

Argumentative Source: I really would not critique anything that this author has stated. Maybe to consider that it might work for some that can juggle more than one thing at a time. Some can do online education while having a job abd other responsibilites.

Reading Response One 4/19/07

MLA Citation: Norman, Matt. "Advantages To Online Education." Ezine Articles. 27 July 2005. 17 Apr. 2007 http://enzinearticles.com/?Advantages-To-Online-Education&id=54628.

Summary: This website tells some of the advantages of using online education. It explains how it is so convenient for everyone. It is much easier for adults to excel in their education or get a plain degree. Is makes it easier for those with children to take care of too. There is no pace but you own. It is easy to do it anywhere you go.

Importance: It is important because it gives some good advantages about how online education works and why it is so convenient.

Supporting Source: This website could be used to support my argument because it tells why people are using online education.

Argumentative Source: I would critique where he talks about it being such an advantage because it isn't for those people who can not motivate their self to do their on work, or be responsibl enough to get the work done on time.

Monday, April 2, 2007

I forgot to write my blog tuesday so I am doing it now. I am having trouble finding things wrong with eBay. I am finding more good things about eBay than bad. I have four pages now. I know that I need to go in more detail with what I have written so far.

Monday, March 19, 2007

Well I am very sad that spring break is over!:( This week I went home and spent time with my family and bf. I was supposed to be going to Colorado to go skiing over the break.... but Cap had to get knee surgery so we had to scratch that trip! :( Instead we went and stayed at the lake for a couple of nights and I got to lay out some and we cooked out. It was pretty fun. I also had to take my car and get the front bumper fixed because some scratched the paint off the front and I have not even had the car two months. That kinda pissed me off. but other than that it was a pretty good break.

Thursday, March 8, 2007

Secon Response

Marlee SerafinMarch 6, 2007
Reading Response


MLA Citation: Woda, Steve. What's Wrong With eBay? It's Simple Economics.
September 27, 2006.

Summary: Instead of ebay, buyers seem to be shopping elsewhere lately. The media is reporting continued fraud and emerging customer service problems with ebay. Ebay is slowly but surely going downhill. All the numbers are steadily dropping. Even ebays top sellers are no longer a part of ebay.


Importance: This work is important because it points out many things people probably don’t realize about ebay. One of the main points it throws out there to the public is the fraud, which is a huge deal. I gathered that either there are not enough buyers in demand or there are just too many sellers who are frauds.


Connections: Nothing relates to this article.




Supporting Source: This article supports my argument because it points out many things wrong with ebay. It mainly talks about the fraud, which was my main point in my argument. It’s hard to know what you’re spending your money on, and this article proves it.



Argumentative Source: I find all of these aspects very good points and I would not critique any of them.